Schedule and Location

Our group meets on the first and third Wednesday of each month at the Nokomis Fire Station. From Sarasota or North, proceed a few blocks south of Albee Road on US 41 (past Matthews-Currie Ford) to Pavonia Road. Turn right (West, toward the bay) at the Fire Station's flashing yellow caution traffic light. From the south on US 41, we are two blocks north of Dona Bay. Turn left onto Pavonia Road at the flashing yellow caution light. At the Fire Station, drive to the fire hall's far end or west side; PLEASE DO NOT BLOCK THE FIRE DEPARTMENT DOORS! We gather in the training room at the far end of the complex for a meet and greet at 6:00 pm but call the Meeting to order at 6:30 pm and take a Ten-minute break at around 7:50 pm. Meeting Adjourns: 9:00 pm

Thursday, February 03, 2022

FEBRUARY 2nd, 2022. That's 2/2/22

Here it is, February already. Another month of Covid has passed. Let's hope it will soon be a thing of the past. We received news our friend Bill Elam will be unable to attend tonight's meeting due to a possible positive test for this darn disease. Be careful to take precautions. We never know when it will strike.

Ernie prepared something for us to think about. (Yeah, I know, it's a preposition at the end of a sentence, but it works.) We all write for different reasons. Most of us write because we enjoy writing. A few might expect to make a few dollars. Only a few, actually only one I can remember, expect to get rich. Ernie says his bookshelf contains a wide range of genres. Some are from the writers in our group; some are classics; some are simply writings passed down by generations of readers. He brought two of those books passed on to him by his father and grandfather. On the fly-page, a friend of his grandfather, Lew Sarett, a poet and author of Lake Superior Country, wrote a dedication to Ernie's grandfather, also named Ernie. A pioneer aviator in a Piper Cub, Duane Cole, was a friend of Ernie's father. His book, Vagabond Cub, was given to Ernie's dad with a nice note on the first page. No matter the reason you write, be prepared to share your work with the world. If you get lucky or work hard enough through advertising, maybe you will get rich. WHO KNOWS?

Ernie Ovitz led off the reading portion of the meeting by sharing a poem written by Lew Sarett. Chippewa Flute Song is one Ernie said he could not do justice to the poem, reading it as a Native American chant with specific voice tone changes was beyond his range. He read it as Ernie and the work came across as a melancholy song.

When Peter Frickel took the floor, we knew we would hear something special, we always do. Reading of a Country Cottage in England, Peter's words became images in our minds. We see the trees, stark and reaching out to hold the branches of others. We smell the disrepair of the grounds, visit the sagging fence, observe the tangle of Mulberry Bushes pressing in on the walls. But above all, it calls to us to inhabit this lonely little cottage. A second reading, A Dead Lady in the Street, carries us to another dimension. After finding an older woman lying in the streets of Paris, the writer realizes she had a letter. He retrieves the letter to post in her stead. He stops at a Café after leaving the woman in the care of authorities. He experiences a desire to read the letter and carefully opens it. Before he can read, a woman interrupts him and asks if she could sit at his table, as there are no other spaces available. Acquiescing, he returns the letter to his pocket and orders a drink, a mixture of Absinthe, sugar, and ice. The woman asks, "why are you troubled?" He looks into her eyes and sees them as the dead woman's eyes. The Garcon grasps his shoulder and shouts, "Awaken! You have a bad dream."

As John Hearon approached the front of the room, he said, "I don't think I can follow Peter." Well, he could, and he did. Writing a Fantasy, John sets the story in South Boston. McNeal "Mick" Brevy is conducting Business as Usual, the opening chapter of I Wasn't Always a Hero. While collecting a loan from a shady character in an alley behind the local tavern with two brothers, his muscle, stands ready to take action should it be needed, even Mick is unaware of what will happen. Will the Galic Spirits that live inside his second soul take over?

SyFy is a wide-open field for an imaginative mind. Ian Schagen has the kind of mind to envision an other-worldly existence while still embracing the quirks of our imperfect world. Andromeda, Chapter 6, tells us of a young woman assaulted by a group of men running from the law as she discovers an internal power of which she's unaware. The story unfolds on a distant planet in a distant galaxy with action aplenty.

As a poet, Don Westerfield shows us insight into life. As a storyteller, his sense of humor comes to the fore. In tonight's reading, The Chamber, we see as Don said, "I don't think it's too hard to write a spy story." Our hero jumps from one adventure to another with barely a breath between them. Skiing in snow-covered mountains, a paid assassin is foiled eliminated while in a love nest with our hero. Moments later, he leaves the mountain retreat and is kidnapped by enemy agents and flown over the ocean. The pilot bails out, leaving him handcuffed in a plane without fuel. He picks the lock on the handcuffs and lands the plane in the water next to a yacht crewed by an all-female crew of beautiful models led by a gorgeous woman assassin known as the Black Widow. After spending a week aboard the boat, he is reluctantly set ashore in Miami. Oh my gosh, he escapes again just as he's about to die an…! Well, you'll have to read this for yourself. Don's tongue-in-cheek humor keeps you grinning. More Don!

You've heard of Toby, the fabulous hound from Bean County, Tennessee. Well, Richard Cope tells us he's at it again, this time at the Bollweevel Ball and Cotillion. It seems a notorious old razorback come down out of the hills to root around in the trash. Toby got left in the truck and ordered to be good. When one of them female cooks started hollerin about that there hog in the trash, Toby come out that truck and run him off good. Unfortunately the sheriff and some others, see Toby out by the trash but don't see no hog. Toby gets the blame. But we all know the real story. Don't we?

It's been a while, but Peter McNally is still writing his story, Rewired. Having suffered multiple strokes, Grand Mal Seizures, and a plethora of debilitating setbacks, including losing the ability to read, write, or even eat. He has recovered most of his intelligence, but not all of his memory. What he does remember is powerful and frightening. Go for it, Peter!

How many of you include quotes in the stories or books you write? Several in our group do. Bruce Haedrich picks selections that further his story; some are historical; some are thought-provoking, and others fit in with the genre of the story. What do you do?

When a memoir is so intense, it can make a good novel. That is what Tish McAuley found out about her life. She is converting her story into a novel format. It is a fascinating story. I can't wait to read more as I have the privilege of doing some editing for her.

 

Well, I guess that's about all for this evening. We heard some powerful stories and experienced great fellowship with like-minded writers. Until we meet again, please, KEEP ON WRITING.