Schedule and Location

Our group meets on the first and third Wednesday of each month at the Nokomis Fire Station. From Sarasota or North, proceed a few blocks south of Albee Road on US 41 (past Matthews-Currie Ford) to Pavonia Road. Turn right (West, toward the bay) at the Fire Station's flashing yellow caution traffic light. From the south on US 41, we are two blocks north of Dona Bay. Turn left onto Pavonia Road at the flashing yellow caution light. At the Fire Station, drive to the fire hall's far end or west side; PLEASE DO NOT BLOCK THE FIRE DEPARTMENT DOORS! We gather in the training room at the far end of the complex for a meet and greet at 6:00 pm but call the Meeting to order at 6:30 pm and take a Ten-minute break at around 7:50 pm. Meeting Adjourns: 9:00 pm

Friday, August 19, 2022

August 17th, 2022

 

Thirteen writers attended tonight’s meeting, including a first-time attendee, Lin Maloney. We hope our writers will help Lin find answers to her issues.

The following is an outline of the subject discussed at this meeting.

So, you want to publish your book. How do you get started? How would you like to publish it?

 

Traditional publisher?

A.       Be sure you’ve finished your book, is it edited, and formatted to a publisher’s standards

On the internet, there are loads of ads wanting to publish or represent authors

Be very careful; some ads are simply scamming to take your money

1.       Look up the publisher you’ve chosen. Most publishers list their standards for submission on a website or in a Publishing Guide. Please read and adhere to them carefully, or they won’t even look at your offering.

2.       Many publishers require you to have an agent.

a.       Use similar methods to find an agent as you used to find a publisher.

b.       Literary agents often represent specialized genres. Read their standards carefully before sending off a query.

c.        Don’t get discouraged if many agents do not respond or do not choose to represent you. Do not expect an instant response. I know writers who have set off over a hundred queries without acceptance and received answers to less than a quarter of the queries.

d.       Legitimate agents do not charge an up-front fee to represent you; they do charge a percentage of the income generated by your work (sometimes as much as 25%).

 

Self Publish?

A.   How much would you pay to publish? 

1.       Research

a.    On the internet, there are loads of ads wanting to publish or represent authors

b.    Be very careful; many ads are simply scams to take your money.

c.     Check your local library. Books listing agents and publishers are available but change often. Check the date of the book; if it’s over six months old, it’s probably out of date.

2.       What services do you need to be sure your book is ready for publication?

a.       Is it edited thoroughly? Editing is important. Again, many editors want your business and advertise on the internet and in publications. Be sure you check them out entirely. Will they give you the edit you need?

b.       Is the formatting correct for publishing

c.        Have you had beta readers read your work, and have you made the necessary corrections?

A.      Would you consider free publishing?

1.       There are free publishing sites out there. Amazon KDP, Dorrance, Lulu, Blurb, Book Baby, and Ingram Spark are a few. Research! Are they truly free? Many have hidden costs, and you learn about them after signing a contract.

2.       Check each of them out. These have standards and rules, as does any publisher

B.       How do I market my book?

1.         Write a blog. Blogs are a great way to explain your book. As an author, you can share advice or experiences on what you’ve learned. Post the first chapter.

2.       Talk to people; Colleagues at clubs or work; Use LinkedIn, Instagram, and other social media to search for people who might be interested in what you’ve written.

3.       Schedule local events; speak at neighborhood meetings; does your neighborhood have a book club?

4.       Check with your local library; do they sponsor readings?

Our discussion about publishing took up the first hour of this meeting. We had some positive comments. Remember, research regarding publication can make a big difference in the quality of your product and its performance.

 

 

We moved on to the reading portion of our meeting. Two of our readers requested some extra time to read a longer piece. Dennis Cathcart was called upon to read first as he’d not had the opportunity to read at a previous meeting.

As Dennis Cathcart came to the podium, he explained he was about to read a very personal and intense piece. He said, “It will be a struggle to read. Dennis is working on the second of his Koule’v ADVENTURES of an AMERICAN SNAKE HUNTER books. Reading Chapter 104 entitled, Hearts Divided. Being in the field while on an expedition to find snakes is not a pleasant way for some to spend their time. After spending time alone while her husband was off on his reptile safaris, Dennis’ wife chooses to accompany him on a two-month-long sojourn into the wilds of South America. It’s hot, humid, and ridden with insects varying in size from tiny to borderline gigantic. Unlike in the movies, the equipment and porters were few, and the tents were not luxurious accommodations. The party consisted of six people and two tents, one for the women and one for the men. A few times, rooms in a local village were available, but they were small, not always pristine, and not private. Mrs. Cathcart did not feel as though she shared her husband’s enthusiasm for reptile hunting. His passion for his profession was something with which she couldn’t compete. Their marriage was strained and destined to fail. To those who find yourselves in competition with an overwhelming passion, seek a middle ground.

 

Ernie Ovitz brought a chapter of his Constantine saga confronting a delicate issue to us this evening. How do you handle incidents prior to the period in history in which an author set his story? Especially if those events might have set a precident for behavior by the citizens of his story. Do you take the time to describe the incident? Do you refer to the incident and move on, causing the reader to research the issue? Is the middle ground feasible? Can you mention the incident and assume readers will read on accepting the premise, “all is normal.” I think my brain stripped a gear.

 

For Those Who Trespass Against Us is the title of a story by Richard Cope confronting an ugly part of our past. For those of us raised in the South of this great country, especially the rural South, we must remember a time of racial and religious strife. A cancerous tumor of hate and injustice grew from organizations hiding behind radicalized religion. And faceless men lurking behind hoods and robes brought fire and hatred into our communities. Fire consumed hastily constructed crosses and rough dwellings of poor working men persecuted because of their race. Richard’s story lays bare the stench of this time as seen through the eyes of a young man from a small town in the rural South.

 

Writing from the perspective of having lived the life of an addict, Tish McAuley brings us the story of Angel. She is struggling to keep her life on track. Abused and constantly afraid of losing her freedom and her child at any moment, she seeks to gather 25,000 dollars to post bail for her drug-dealing husband. The once abundant cash flow dries up as Law Enforcement impounds a quarter-million dollar drug shipment. Angel tries to find the cash. Who are her friends? Who will turn her over to the law? Is there loyalty in the drug world?

 

Poetry is a tricky genre. Scott Anderson is a magician with words. Reading three poems this evening, he has taken everyday happenings to a new level. Landscape artists tend to paint in the open air. The light is true. Its purity makes the colors more vibrant and less distorted by artificial luminance. Scott thought maybe a poet could benefit from the Au’Natural. The result was his work, A Musing en Plein Air. Scott now prefers to work at his desk in an air-conditioned room. Being caught in a rainstorm brought about the second poem, Downpour. As a person caught in sudden rain, a poet sometimes is bathed in words as they descend upon him. Who knew a simple short burst of words could be so beautiful? Try to find Scott’s poem, Five Petal Red Roses.

 

Closing out the night’s readings, Don Westerfield enthralled us with the story of Benjamin’s Monkey. A P-51 Mustang pilot in the South Pacific during WWII had a reputation for being, for the lack of a better word, lazy. He found a friend in the form of a pet monkey named, of course, MONK. After many failures, Ben taught that monkey to fly the airplane. Surely that can’t be true. Legend has it that the squadron ran into a swarm of Japanese Zeros on Ben’s last mission. All the planes came home safely but two. Ben’s plane was smoking badly and going down, but nobody saw it crash. Nearly a half hour passed, and watchers spotted a Mustang on a long low approach to the field. A dense trail of smoke spewed from the engine. The runway ended on the beach. The plane drew closer but didn’t lower its wheels but settled down in the shallow surf. It bounced off the water and skidded across the sand, coming to rest in the middle of the runway. Out from the shattered window of the cockpit, little Monk leaped to the field and raced toward the nearby jungle. The rescue crew ripped open the canopy. Ben was at the controls, quite dead.

 

Well, that does it for this evening. Next meeting, Bruce Haedrich and Peter Frickel are first to read as we ran short on time this evening. Until then, KEEP ON WRITING!

Sunday, August 07, 2022

Aug. 3rd, 2022

Our discussion tonight centered on how you establish a timeline for your story. It is super important for all those historical fiction writers out there. An author can’t have things, equipment, weather, people, or occurrences happening before the historical facts allow. Someone is going to call the writer to task for a simple error. That spoils the whole story for some readers. James Kelly, the author of, These Sacred Lands, tells us how he keeps his timeline straight. James uses a deck of 3X5 cards with pertinent information listed in order. He extensively researches each of his characters and actions to ensure accuracy. However, even with that research, errors occurred. Fortunately, using the Amazon KDP system to publish, he corrected the errors as soon as he became aware of them.

Likewise, Ernie Ovitz, author of The Seventh King, uses extensive research to validate the historical accuracy of his story. Using real historical characters presents challenges in writing because sometimes history has more than one point of view toward these persons. Dates often differ from one account to another, and different historians record facts of an event as they perceive events differently. It falls to the author to modify the event as they see fit. Errors will occur, and an author must account for differences in the historian’s POV before the final draft.

I once wrote a story set in the early twentieth century and had a house using florescent lighting five years before the invention came to the market. I fixed it after a curious little bell kept ringing in my mind. Thank you, bell.

Several writers chimed in with similar incidents, and suggestions for keeping a timeline were varied. Index cards are popular; a personal history with dates for characters.

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With eleven readers requesting time, we started our reading session with Ed Ellis, whose new book, Engage Possibility, is now on the market and available through Amazon. Tonight Ed favored us with two new poems. Nature’s Child showed us some of the beautiful things Nature does for us throughout our life but also relates to the demands of our Cosmic father. How much do you know about Protons? I knew every atom had to have at least one, but in Proton Supremacy, Ed tells us, “We are not… alone.”

Constantine’s army must cross a strait to attack an overwhelming enemy force in 324AD. Ernie Ovitz reads Chapter 19 of the 3rd Book and tells us that the Emperor’s son, Christmas, commands a fleet of ships now loaded with several Legions of Constantine’s army sails up the coast guided by Juno’s light. Stealth and luck allow the strategic maneuver to succeed. Victory is in the air.

Why am I writing this story? Tish Mcauley told us why she’s writing Angel. For years Tish was abused mentally and physically by men in her life. She was addicted to drugs and ridiculed for knowing things beyond what she was supposed to know. Upon becoming sober, Tish realized she had a gift. A gift that once she thought was a curse. Tish found out she was a Psychic Empath. She knew too much and struggled to handle it. Now she wants to help others who are being abused and help other Empaths find balance in their lives.

Scott Anderson came across a word he didn’t know the meaning of, evanescence. What did he do? What every writer ought to, he looked it up. Evanescence means; something that disappears but was almost imperceptible in the first place. Scott then read his poem entitled Bubble, a few words that say so very much. His second reading was the poem, French Kiss. Again, the feeling catches the listener with a soft caress on their heart.

Our Super Nova, Peter Frickel, took over the podium as he admitted, “Writing is sometimes a struggle,” how do you find the right words to explain life, death, fear, hate, or any emotion? What is the life or death of each word? Peter, you find the right word at least 99% of the time. You couldn’t settle for less. As he continued, he gave us an education in word use as he described the passions of females and males in literature. A woman’s desires are embodied by the French in a word, iouissance, while a man’s word is limerence. For those of us who write more in a more vulgar parlance, we might use less sophisticated vocabulary.

Don ‘Westy’ Westerfield is proud of his Hoosier/Kentucky dialect, as he should be, and he uses it effectively while reading. Tonight he gifted us with a reading of his short story, The Rain Barrel. Now in his older years, a man looks out the window and sees an old rain barrel his father made nearly a hundred years before. It stood at the corner of the house for all those years, catching water. Three brothers bathed in the barrel’s water; two didn’t return from a foreign war. What will happen to the rain barrel when the man is gone?

Tonight must be the night for explanations. John Hearon tells us the protagonist in his story, I Wasn’t Always A Hero, is loosely based on the myth of Fionn mac Cumhaill (Finn McCool), who died in battle and left a message, “only my story shall remain.”

Those Who Trespass Against Me is the title of Richard Cope’s newest short story. A small rural community in the south holds an Independence Day parade. The KKK brought up the rear with a contingent including the Grand Dragon of the state’s Klan. Two young people set out to follow the klansmen to a farm outside of town. They were supposed to meet a friend before going there. Their friend was a person of color; he didn’t show….

James Kelly closed out the readings with Chapter 37 of his book These Sacred Lands. Young Lt. Mackenzie defies the military norm as he orders his men to charge the mass of Lakota. Not used to the troopers charging into a superior force, the Lakota were confused as they broke and left the battle. Mackenzie learned the ways of the Lakota and gambled on his actions giving his men the advantage.

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It was an informative meeting. We heard a lot of good stories and enjoyed the evening. We hope to see you all at our next meeting on August 17th. Until then KEEP ON WRITING!