A new year has begun. I hope it proves to be a better, more
productive year than previous times. I regret to pass on the following. As I
sat down to write this blog, I learned that our good friend and mentor, Peter
Frickel, passed away this morning, January 21st. A stalwart
within our group, he will be sorely missed. Peter joins a list of notable
authors who graced us with their presence and now watch over us from where the
pain of life does not exist.
With some cool weather upon us, I find it difficult to stay
indoors and concentrate on writing. I guess that is one disadvantage of living
in Florida. With temperatures hovering in the 60 to 80 degrees F. range, the
sunny outdoors beckon. I think a notebook and laptop will be my companions at
the park for a while. Oh, by the way, I leave my cell phone at home on these
sojourns.
We hosted twelve attendees at our meeting this week. We
welcomed Bill Elam back as he has returned from colder climes. Jeffrey Kutcher
introduced us to his daughter, Sunny, who did a masterful job reading Jeff’s
work. Seven of us presented work to the group in the reading session.
As writers, we may embrace, or at least tolerate, different
points of view expressed by others. Our participation must remain limited to
the art of writing, not to criticize the content or thoughts presented. Each
work has qualities we can evaluate based on the craft, not the ideas.
Leading off was our co-host, Ernie Ovitz. Ernie is
working on a trilogy of historical novels set in the era of Constantine’s rule of the Roman
Empire. His handling of the supposed personal conversations and actions brings history
to life. After all, Romans were humans encompassing all the failings and superstitions
of their society. Subterfuge and discontent fueled the activities of political
and religious entities as the Emperor moved the seat of Roman power away from
Rome to the new city of Constantinople. At a celebration of the Emperor’s victory
over rebel forces, where statues of Constantine and his son Crispus arrive for
presentation to the people, the cart transporting them suffers a broken axle. The
Statues spill onto the pavement but are not damaged. Did the Emperor’s enemies
sabotage the axle?
Bill Elam strayed from his usual presentation of
prose to bring us a poem written in his days of youthful manhood. The
transition of a worrisome image from the stark image of a leafless tree to an embodiment
of salvation. Upon his approach, the tree transforms into a Cross.
Remembering her father, Jaquelin Sullivan, recalls her
shock as her father reveals he is diagnosed with Alzheimer’s. A firefighter
in Boston’s busy Ladder 7 station, the busiest Firehouse in the nation, he was
a hero but now, he will be unable to recall even the basic details of his job as he falls into the depths of dementia. Writing about such times is traumatic and challenging,
but oft-times therapeutic. Jaquelin, we know it’s hard, but stay the
course. Your story honors your father and gives us a chance to peek into a hero’s
world.
Jeffrey Kutcher has led a life filled with change. As
he writes his autobiography, he reveals thoughts and feelings from deep within.
As a writer, Jeffrey is talented, but his reading of his work sometimes suffers as he
tends to rush through the story. Tonight he solved that problem. His daughter, Sunny,
read the chapter with skill and clarity. Her acting training gave us a dramatic
and authentic impression of what it is like to be in sales at a significant
stockbroker’s office in New York. The pressure and background politics of such
an office are overwhelming for those without the psyche needed to handle such pressure.
What happens next, Jeffrey?
Gaia 2, that’s what Bruce Haedrich is
writing now. Earth (Gaia) speaks to us, explaining what has happened, is happening,
and will happen in the future in the form of a letter to humanity. Unused to
dealing with such short periods as the human lifespan, Gaia tells us of eons of
change and life cycles on her surface. Is the human population declining? Will
humans become extinct like the dinosaurs? Will Gaia live on into eternity? Will
she answer these questions?
“Mindless Drivel” is how Richard Cope
describes a few short pieces he has written. He includes In Cahoots,
Salty Sailor Talk, and I’m Growing a Beard in that category.
Richard’s work is thought-provoking, humorous, and relevant to the times. It is
always a pleasure to hear his reading.
When Don Westerfield took the floor, we expected to
hear at least one of his excellent poems. Not so this time. He brought the
opening scenes from a story entitled; It’s Only Business. A young
man returns to San Francisco after graduating from Yale. The great earthquake of
1906 was still fresh in people’s minds, and rebuilding was underway. Our
young man finds out he is to take over the operation of his Aunt’s thriving
enterprise, Landis House, the most successful brothel in all of San Francisco.
Well, I guess that’s about all for this meeting. I’ll see
you at the next meeting on February 1st at the Nokomis Fire House.
We call to order at 6:30 PM. Until then, KEEP ON WRITING.