Schedule and Location

Our group meets on the first and third Wednesday of each month at the Nokomis Fire Station. From Sarasota or North, proceed a few blocks south of Albee Road on US 41 (past Matthews-Currie Ford) to Pavonia Road. Turn right (West, toward the bay) at the Fire Station's flashing yellow caution traffic light. From the south on US 41, we are two blocks north of Dona Bay. Turn left onto Pavonia Road at the flashing yellow caution light. At the Fire Station, drive to the fire hall's far end or west side; PLEASE DO NOT BLOCK THE FIRE DEPARTMENT DOORS! We gather in the training room at the far end of the complex for a meet and greet at 6:00 pm but call the Meeting to order at 6:30 pm and take a Ten-minute break at around 7:50 pm. Meeting Adjourns: 9:00 pm

Sunday, November 05, 2023

Nov. 1st, 2023

 

First things first, for my friends in the writer’s community. My email was hacked and eliminated. I’ve posted my new email address here on the right side of the screen. Please update your contacts list and send me a short note so I may retrieve your addresses. I am currently struggling to recover my data from my backup files. Thank you, Rod.

 

Ten of us gathered at the firehouse this evening to discuss our work and other issues we face as writers. Ernie shared some information from an article about AI. What’s happening in the world of technology is mind-boggling, as usual. Investigate carefully and protect your selves and your work with multiple backup systems. Rod read a list of 10 Rules for Writing from Elmore Leonard. After a short discussion, we moved on to the reading portion of the meeting.

 

First up tonight was Ernie Ovitz, with a reading from Imperiam, entitled A House Divided. As members of the Emperor’s family travel through Gaul, a raiding party of Frank warriors is reported pillaging the area. Even though guarded by a troop of Roman soldiers, Constantine dispatches additional units to hunt down the raiders.

 

Dennis Cathcart wrote a remarkable two-part memoir of his adventures while hunting serpents and reptiles across the globe. Tonight, he read his first attempt at fiction writing, The House in the Woods. A young boy tests his courage by visiting an abandoned house in a dense forest outside of town. His friends tease him but lack the fortitude to accompany him. The boy ventures into the woods and approaches the house but cannot summon the courage to enter it. He tells his best friend, and the word spreads that he has been to the house. At a Halloween program at the school, his favorite teacher dresses as a witch. The boy summons the courage to revisit the place on Halloween night. His friends all decline, most using made-up excuses to accompany him. Bolstered by a conversation with his Dad, the boy sets out through the dark night toward the house. Is he lost in the darkness? Continuing upon what he thinks is the proper path, he sees a light ahead. The porch light is lit. Using all of his willpower, he knocks on the door. A woman in a black witch’s costume answers the door. Is she his teacher? He can’t be sure. We’ll have to wait on publication to see what happens next.

 

Continuing with his sci-fi tale, Aquatania, Bruce Haedrich tells of a fleet of six spaceships nearing completion in space. Their top-secret mission is to take a select group of people off Earth before the remnants of a renegade moon from the planet Janus crash into Earth, destroying all life. People are chosen who are free of disease and unpolluted by drugs or outside physical dependencies. Each ship will carry 2,000 people to new planets ripe for colonization. Will humanity survive? Stay tuned.

 

With the roots of his family tree anchored in Kentucky, Don Westerfield brings us a fictional story of The Trial of Hubby Moore as related by the Editor in Chief of the Bulswit County Weekly. It seems the Bulswit County local judge is competing with Hubby Moore as they ply their trade as Moonshiners. With a complicated string of events unfolding, Hubby is arrested for killing an old friend of his that took advantage of Hubby not being around for a few days to sleep with Hubby’s wife. Hubby is scheduled to appear before this judge. Quite a coincidence, don’t you think? Well, one thing leads to another, and the trial commences. Hubby may not be the sharpest knife in the drawer, but he has a few tricks up his sleeve. Even revenuers have been unable to find ole’ Hubby’s still. The judge dispatches his faithful bailiff to trick Hubby into revealing the still’s location. As the trial winds its way through the week, a still is discovered, a wife is unfaithful, and… well, why don’t you just read this here dern story for yourself in Don’s book Grandpa’s Book of Poetry, Prose, and Ponderings, The Musings of an Old Mind.

 

James Kelly brought another chapter of Tremain for us. It’s 1895 in Jefferson Barracks, MO, and young Tremain is about to propose to a young lady with whom he has fallen in love. He is a Lakota Sioux man raised by the MacKinsie family, and she is the daughter of a white trader and his Sioux wife. Tremain struggles to muster the courage to ask for her hand in the tradition of his people. In the meantime, he considers taking a job as a lawman in the Wild West.

 

It’s looking more like Fall around here; the temperatures are falling into the 70s and 80s, and there’s more traffic on the roads. We look forward to seeing some of our northern writers coming back soon. In the meantime, we’ll KEEP ON WRITING and reading.

Saturday, October 21, 2023

October 18th, 2023

“The Idea of a Story Idea,” where do writers get their story ideas? To begin our discussion, filling in for Rod, Ernie read from Ron Carlson Writes a Story, by author Ron Carlson and his chapter so titled. Scott Anderson responded from a poet’s point of view, and the conversation took off from there. A lively discussion followed as each member shared their sources of inspiration, motivation, and methodologies. Forty-five minutes later, we were still going. Our discussion group had seven members, and readings followed. Anne Moore and Scott Anderson joined in the discussion and critiqued our readers. Our readers were Peter McNally, Richard Cope, Bruce Haedrich, Jim Kelly, and Ernie Ovitz.

 

 

Turning to our readings:

 

Peter McNally led with a continuation of his autobiographical work, “Rewired.” Peter had suffered a stroke and seizures, resulting in a debilitating memory loss and a broken back. Trapped at home, he describes a strained marriage and a wife unable to cope with his condition. His vivid portrait left the group sitting on the edge of their seats – high compliments to Peter for a well-written piece and for his great progress physically and with his writing skills.

 

Richard Cope offered a short story and an intriguing alternate history. His premise, what if John Wilkes Booth, Lincoln’s assassin, had escaped to England – an England sympathetic to the Southern cause and a nation without an extradition treaty with the United States? However, all things were not rosy for Booth. His presence proves an embarrassment. The prime minister and the home secretary discussed the situation but deferred to the wishes of the Queen. Indeed, Booth was in for a surprise.

 

Bruce Haedrich read excerpts from his science fiction piece to bring the group up to speed on his progress. Bruce is making good progress and all sounds exciting through Chapter Seven. Well done Bruce

 

Jim Kelly read from Tremain of his Mackenzie Family saga. “A New Direction,” Tremain has proven an accomplished frontier scout for the Army in the Oklahoma Territory. After two years of service, times are changing with the subjugation of the native tribes, leaving the territory to settlers and outlaws to test them. Tremain is ready for a change and plans to return to Missouri to see family. Along the way, he meets a US Marshal, and the two men talk. Both like what they see, and a job offer follows. Tremain asks for time to think about it. His answer will follow in the next chapter.

 

Ernie Ovitz concluded the reading session with a reading from Book Three, Imperium, The Thirteenth Apostle, a novel on the life of the Roman Emperor Constantine: chapter 59, Nicomedia, January 7th, AD 325. Bishop Ossius returned from his mission to Alexandria and Antioch carrying news that trouble remained in the church. Three bishops had been found teaching in support of the wayward Egyptian presbyter Arius, contrary to the Catholic faith. The men were unrepentant, and the synod at Antioch pronounced anathemas to their false doctrines, suspended the men from church office, and called a new synod to be held at Ancyra to decide the men’s fate. Constantine’s reply – “No, this will not do.” Bishop Ossius was stunned, “I don’t understand, my lord.” The emperor insisted, “I have led His armies to victory. He has proclaimed the unity of His people to me. No, this will not do.” He said I will have a council of the whole church. It shall be at Nicaea, the City of Victory, “God shall receive his victory at Nicaea.” Thus, plans for the first great council of the church were made to be held in June of that year.

 

We hope to see all our members at the next meeting – Wednesday, November 1st. New members and visitors are welcome. We are an open group. Until then, keep on writing.