We kicked off the meeting with thirteen writers attending at 6:30 pm.
Rod DiGruttolo again skillfully wielded the gavel and ran another great meeting. We welcomed back Susan
Haley, iconic founder and spark-plug for the group. Susan spent the
summer with friends and relatives and returned only two days before
the meeting. We also welcomed back Robin Wise and Dianne Shedlock,
and it was good to see Ben drop in once again. It was another great
evening as we heard from Russ Heitz who, working on an idea from Irv
Newman, collected thoughts and comments about Ed Lyman to be used in
a tribute to Ed that will be distributed at the Christmas meeting.
Our
Christmas get-together will be held during the next meeting, Dec
19th. Kerri is bringing the Dunkin' Donuts coffee, and
every else is encouraged to bring whatever favorite holiday treats
they'd like to share. Everyone is invited, including spouses and
guests. Any goodies not consumed, more likely devoured, will be
donated to the Nokomis Volunteer Fire Department. We will present the
Fire Department Chief Steve Kona with the holiday donation we all
made together, a total of $91.00 dollars.
A
discussion about our meeting format will lead us to more
presentations and guest speakers in the future. We'll kick off the New
Year with a meeting January 2nd that will reduce the time available
for reading, but allow for more discussions and presentations. Also
decided was a new procedure for critiques. In the future,
presentations for critique will be limited to 1500 words, or no more
than three pages. All presentations will be printed for handout,
double spaced, and will be returned to the presenter, without names,
after the material has been critiqued. Discussions may follow the
readings, but they will be general and not specific.
Rod
solved one problem neatly by having Peter Frickel read first. That
way, everyone has to follow Peter! Again, Peter's tales of youth of
another time in Africa, He Looked At Me, and “Nell”
held everyone's attention. Don Westerfield's The Flirt, caught
everyone off guard. Not to be read outside the sanctuary, he asked.
Funny stuff, great writing. Robin read “Sparky,” and had
everyone convinced it was not a piece of fiction. It was, of course,
although we have all had pets that have taken us to the edge. Her
husband vehemently denied any part of “Walt's” heart attack.
Great to have Robin back.
Ed
Ellis continued with his work in progress, tentatively named
Asymmetrical Wars.
More great adventure writing, the post-nuclear war saga continues.
We got to hear Chapter 27 of Joanne Phillips Adventures of
a Sea Hag and said farewell to
Sid, a character we had come to know quite well. Jim Kelly did it
once again with two poems, Changes
and Noise, both of
which are excellent poems. We can't wait for Jim's next anthology.
Russ
Heitz read Waiting, a
unique short piece that started lightheartedly and turned
introspective in less than one page! Great writing! Dianne Shedlock
continued the spell-binding writing with her Flashback,
a piece with an unexpected twist about dread and fatalism. Welcome
back, Dianne, more writing, please.
We
read through break, and finished early. We'll see everyone at the
Christmas gathering on the 19th.
See you then.
George
When I knew Ed, he was a highly respected antique dealer in Mamaroneck, NY, He also was a dedicated volunteer to the Elmsford Animal Shelter in NY. I admired the peaceful and loving way he lived his life. I grieved with Jane, Ev and Ed when his son, Danny died and hoped that he had good friends down there in FL after he lost his wife and Jane. I feel so much better knowing that right up to the end, he was functioning and had friends like the ones he made in your writers group. I hope to find something like this for my 92-year-old-dad up here in White Plains, as he also has plenty of stories to tell.